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He talked so much, as if it would never end. She was tried of his endless talks; her patience was all consumed. The ambiance made her more vulnerable. She asked him to stop blabbering. She wanted him to make some love. Passion was still missing in his eyes; speech was the only sense that he used. Romance absent, so was sexual pleasure. She asked him to sense what her heart’s words were, what messages her smile conveys. After all the real pleasure is in acceptance, in your heart’s defeat. Instead, he made her silent. And the night ended like that, in silence, forever.
A drabble written by yours truly.
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zizbiz Featured By Owner May 28, 2007   Photographer
I liked it bunches ^^
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raheel07 Featured By Owner May 28, 2007
:)
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dehog Featured By Owner May 23, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
good stuff mate...one reasons americans belive...TALK is CHEAP ! ;P
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NakedYank Featured By Owner May 23, 2007
It's so sad. But sadness has its place too.
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raheel07 Featured By Owner May 23, 2007
thanks some of the correction is worth doing. As far as suggestions are concerned I like the way it is.
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