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I was sitting there like an invisible man. It was by my own choice. A lady came to the street where ATM stood tall. I was waiting since so long. I robbed her. The ladies who who saw me are now dead. The street was not a busy one. There were only four females, one got robbed and three got killed. Why did I leave the one whom I robbed? The answer is simple. I love hiding, like an invisible man. The hide and seek game was listed as an achievement in my resume of life. Secondly, I only rob a person once. There were only two choices either rob or shoot. I chose money and I am still the invisible man. Police is still trying to find me but they wouldn't be able to find me because I am an invisible man.

I was sitting there like an invisible man and dreaming such non-sense.
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monib Jun 25, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
nice. more like a modern psychological poem:)
and it goes with the picture:)
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:iconraheel07:
I don't write that much poem but this is kind of my style in prose. thanks for all the support :)
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:iconmonib:
monib Jun 26, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
by the way, you speak Farsi, maybe another accent. Can you read Persian Farsi as well?
I have some writing on my blog if you could read them I'd be glad.
My early ones are short poems, just ignore the long written ones if you went there. Some are just pieces of writing.
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check this out, it's simple:
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:iconraheel07:
no I speak only English and Urdu.
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zizbiz Jun 22, 2007   Photographer
';Police is still trying to find' <<< Is that not a grammatical error? I hate to crtisize something so good. It matches the picture perfectly!
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:iconraheel07:
It was written with a thought that they are just trying and is unable to find so they are still trying =p
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zizbiz Jun 24, 2007   Photographer
Oohhh. I get it now *taps temple* I love it ^^
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dehog Jun 22, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
i like i like ! I m planning to do some writing too now !
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:iconraheel07:
jaldi karo jaldi karo
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dehog Jun 25, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
ab parh bhi lo, it's online ! :P
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