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Now stop this blood shed
On the street beside pure lake
Wine's already red
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Bloodshed - a global phenomena
Lake being a eastern symbol for ganges and other holy lakes.
Wine being a western symbol
Red is emotive, thus universal even beyond the boundary of globalization :)

For Contest - Acrostic Haiku : [link]

PS: My first ever Acrostic and the first ever Haiku :)
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Mattiello May 14, 2009  Professional Writer
I'm sorry. For some unknown reason, I forgot to tell you that you need to add a liaison on ether side of the stanza. Here is the link on how to do that.

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is it okay now.
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Mattiello May 24, 2009  Professional Writer
Yes it is! Thank you. :bow:
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RickHaigh May 8, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
very symbolic, Raheel. excellent..
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Mattiello May 5, 2009  Professional Writer
Accepted for the contest! Good luck!
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