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From that last day of monsoon, her life fell into a complete darkness. They felt she wouldn't open her eyes. He’s gone.

Both loved rains. In monsoons, their routine was getting and having fun. He always asked, “How can a sky cry?” She always replied with a smile accompanying clouds’ joyful tears for their unconditional love. But now of grief as he was dead in a blast.

Sarah, a mother in the lap of her mother, finally opened her wet eyes. All she saw was darkness of eternal night and his son as a shining star in the sky.
A story where everyone cried along with the sky.
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faile88 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006
that's so sad... :cry:

The first sentence in the second paragraph bugs me a little. Not sure how to fix it, you can work with it.

Very sad. Good job, and good luck in the contest! :D
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